Feedback on Story board...

After feedback from our presentation sessions, I was advised to focus more on the dunk and the 2 characters of the tea cup and the biscuit, rather than the beginning where the tea is being made etc etc. This way, I can focus more on creating the right tone and attitude for my characters and its a lot simpler too. I think I'm going to use cell animation for this... but I'm going to try it out first...